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the amount of support

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

INTRODUCTION:

The bar charts represent the information about the people, who study for career and interest and they get employers’ support according to five different age groups.

OVERALL:

Overall, there are more people under 26 years old, who studying for a career . However, the far maximum employer’s support is noticed for those, who are under 26 years old.

PARAGRAPH 1:

It is apparent that 80%of students aged under 26 study for their career, whereas only 10% of students study for their interest. Studying for career decreases over the given age groups, ranging from 70%to 20%.An increase of 55% is seen in those people, who study for interest from youngsters to older people.

PARAGRAPH 2:

Probing further, the far higher employers support is observed for the youngster , accounting for 65% while this figure decrease rapidly to 50% for 26-29 age group and 39 for 40 – 49 age group. Only 35%support is received from employers, who under 30-39 age group whilst this figure increased slightly for elder people, amounting to 45%.


This is the end of ACADEMIC  writing task 1 (The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.)

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